What do you think of my story so far -Its for 7th grade Writing class?

by Foodie Buddha
Question by Lindsay M: What do you think of my story so far -Its for 7th grade Writing class?
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Thats all She Wrote was a band of inspiration, dedacation and fustration. Formed two years ago in an old dilapitaded school builiding, this band was all I ever done with my life. And all we have ever done with our life. It was Dylans idea to start a band. Dylan learned to play gutair before he could walk which by now makes him a jaded pro, and by

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